Tuesday 8 May 2012

Evaluation

Evaluation


1.) In what ways does your media product use, develop or challenge forms and conventions of real media products?

When looking at my front cover, I can see that it makes use of conventions of real magazines that include features such as the way the main artist slightly covers the title of the magazine. I decided to make use of this as I feel it gives the cover an overall professional appearance and enables the artist to really dominate the page, I think this would cause any potential readers to pick up the magazine, knowing that there is a significant artist featured inside.

The artist on the cover is also portraying common forms of magazines by looking directly into the camera. This feature is very effective as the eye contact creates a connection between the artist and the reader; which is an element which I think would grab the attention of someone and draw them in to pick up the magazine. Another convention which I have utilized is the type of clothing that is displayed on the cover. The way my model is wearing a hoodie immediately suggests that the magazine has a youthful and rebellious genre, after looking at the clothing on many hip-hop magazine covers, slouchy clothes like hoodies are a common item used to represent this type of music.

A feature that I chose to utilize which is common in real magazines is a banner at the top of my front cover. I found this was a useful thing to have as it provided me with an area to add additional information without it covering any part of my image, as well as making my cover look more professional and realistic. I chose to fill this banner with poster freebies, another convention used within magazines. Freebies are something which would draw in a customer as the item included may be something they are interested in having.
I have also used a different style of banner above the text on my double page spread, which I feel is a development from generic double page spreads. I decided to use this to make it have an overall professional appearance as well giving the page a different but interesting layout. I used this banner as an area to inform the reader about my artists album and include ‘@VIXEN’; a twitter address in which readers can go to ‘follow’ and discover more about the artist.

The use of a website is something which I included in my magazine that I found to be a popular element within existing magazines. This alongside twitter offers other elements of media and technology that readers can use to find out more about the magazine itself and other articles it has done.

I would consider my chosen colour scheme as a development from conventions in existing magazines. Common and stereotypical colours someone would expect to be used for this genre of music may be reds or green, emphasising the relevance of money and violence involved in the background of the music. Whereas I have used quite a light but bold blue; I think it’s effective as it shows the reader an alternative perspective on hip hop and I think the use of this colour would cause the magazine to stand out to customers if it were sitting alongside magazines which use conventional colours.

Another development which I feel is effective within my magazine is the quote I have included on the side of my contents page. This quote originates from my main artists double page spread; I think it works well as it fits into the design of my magazine and it reminds the reader that ‘Vixen’ is the most significant element of it.

I feel that on the front cover, I have challenged the design of existing hip hop magazines with the placement of the barcode. Rather than having the barcode in the bottom corner of a page where it shouldn’t stand out too much, I have placed mine underneath the magazine name. I have only seen this once in one of my magazine researches, where I think it looks effective due to the way it fits in with the design and the colour scheme.

The name of my magazine ‘716’ is also an element which challenges conventions of hip hop magazines, as it isn’t immediately obvious what the name means, if anything. I chose 716 as it is the area code for West New York, which is one of the main areas that this genre of music originates from.

2.) How does your media product represent particular social groups?

My magazine represents the hip hop interested social group through the way of clothing. I had chosen my models to both wear hoodies as they are seen to be a representation of outcast youth and hip hop gang culture. They’re a controversial item of clothing which some people think displays power and success; where other people view them as being a symbol of menace and lawlessness. I think this will prove conventional for hip hop interested people, but also intriguing due to my chosen colour scheme. Trainers are another element of clothing which possibly represents this particular social group in the same way. 

The position of my model on my contents page also represents the stereotypical idea of youth today, leaning against a wall, hanging around with their hood up maybe showing he has something to hide. I think it’s effective as it shows the reader that appearance is irrelevant, considering the success of the artist featured in the magazine. 

The ethnicity of my chosen models may be seen to be challenging what you would usually expect in a hip hop magazine. People from my audience research had said that they wouldn’t usually envisage white British people to be featured in a hip hop magazine, considering the origins of the genre aren’t British. Yet I think it develops conventions in view of emerging artists from this ethnicity.

3.) What kind of media institution might distribute your media product and why?

Frontline Ltd
“The UK’s leading magazine sales and Distribution Company”
They are the owner of the company Seymour, who is “The first choice distributor for independent publishers” who distribute for magazines like Q

4.) Who would be the audience for your media product?

The audience for my magazine would be those people who have an interest in hip hop music or even people who are just generally interested in hearing about different artists. Considering my magazine has photos in which are have camera shots other than close ups, readers are able to see the clothing of the artists which may catch their interest as well.

5.) How did you attract/address your audience?

As I have mentioned before, different elements of clothing are something that would attract my audience. I’d also say the ‘Plus!’ section that I have included on my front cover is something that would attract my audience as well as there is a list of different artists that are featured in the magazine, where one of those artists is bound to catch the eye of someone within my target audience. Also the quotes that I have used on the front cover and the contents page would attract my audience considering they fit into the style of my magazine, and add that extra element of interest; and they also give the reader a brief insight into what the article mentioned is about. Considering the quote comes from that particular story and no other in the magazine shows the reader how significant the artist is which may attract them and influence them to pick up the magazine to have a look.

Even the use of different Medias would attract and address my audience in a different way. Considering this magazine is aimed toward youth i.e. 16+, those who are more interested in new technologies, elements like websites and twitter gives them other platforms to visit so that they can find out more about the magazine and the artist that has been featured in it.

The positioning of my models is something which does so as well as you can see that my contents page contains a model who is leaning against a wall with his hood up, where stereotypically people would expect he had something to hide. This makes it an image that can be related to, so it interests potential readers. Whereas on my double page spread, the hand positioning can be seen as a generic pose, but even a gang sign, which is something commonly seen in hip hop music magazines that I have researched.

The use of including freebies and competitions would also interest people as, if they are something that my audience is interested in then it may influence them to take a look at the magazine.


6.) What have you learnt about technologies from the process of constructing this product?

The technologies I used in this process of creating a music magazine include: InDesign, Adobe Photoshop CS4, and SLR cameras. Beginning with the SLR cameras, I have learnt not only how to simply take photos, but I’ve learnt about the different features of the camera that each creates different effects on the images. These include for example, aperture (in which the opening on a camera lens can change in size depending on the amount of light you want to enter it) and shutter speed, even outside elements like the rule of thirds.
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I used Adobe Photoshop to alter and edit my photos that I included in my magazine, I commonly used effects such as the spot healing tool which let me remove any blemishes and also making adjustments to the brightness/contrast and the hue/saturation in order for my images to follow my colour scheme.

InDesign was used to place all of the elements I wanted in my magazine. It proved very useful for arranging each of the features so that I could lay them out in the best way possible.

7.) Looking back at your preliminary task, what do you feel you have learnt in the progression from it to the full product?

Looking back at my previous task of creating a school magazine, I have learnt that there are many different codes and conventions that apply to different magazines, and the genres within them. I’ve discovered that each magazine differs even down to who is featured in in them and mise en scene including clothing and styling, positioning, expressions, etc can all give a different impression and effect on the reader.

Monday 30 April 2012

Diary Entry #10


Diary Entry #10

With my magazine completed and my blog almost fully up to date, I went on to plan my DVD evaluation to finally sum up my whole project.

Diary Entry #9


Diary Entry #9

After exporting my final cuts, I added them to my blog and analysed its different aspects and why I’d made decisions to do what I have done. Alongside this I made sure to look through my blog so that I could go back and make the last touches to it for it to be roughly complete.

Final Cuts & Analysis


Final Cuts & Analysis

Front cover
Enlarging the image on my cover to fill the page and slightly cover the magazine name immediately made a visible improvement. Once I’d shortened the text on the page it proved a lot easier to place it somewhere that I could be read clearly. There was still a blank space at the top right hand side corner of the cover, so I moved the issue number to that space, which also helped clear the bottom of my pace which was previously cluttered with text. I also added an extra small story in a rounded box, which I feel gave the page a more professional appearance whilst evening out the amount of text on each side of the cover. Like my audience feedback had directed, I made my barcode smaller and then moved the website underneath it which also tidied the bottom of the page and made it look a lot less cluttered.

I finally faded out the right edge of the 716 box in order to take the harshness off the square. I felt by doing this my front cover looked a lot more appealing and caused the model to stand out more effectively.






Contents page
After I added more contents to the list, I shifted it all further to the right so that it wouldn’t obstruct the image as much as it was. I remembered to keep the quote and the website, and removed the page number to eliminate the confusion that readers may have with all the numbers on the page.

Like I was recommended, I went away and took new photos of a different model and edited the colours in order for them to correspond with my colour scheme. I remembered to add the fading effect onto this image as my audience feedback believed it was a useful and professional looking feature. After doing all of this I found I was left with a blank space just underneath the contents; to fill this in I placed the twitter address of my magazine, which provided a link to a different media that readers could follow.








Double page spread
The image that is now on my double page spread was originally on my contents page. I was advised to move it to where it is now because it is a good quality photo and would be more suitable on my double page spread.

Because the left page was filled with this image, I had to rearrange the text into 3 equal columns on the right page, which is something I needed to execute anyway. I found this new layout had a much more effective appearance, I think it would draw readers in a lot more successfully than the way it was before. Because the text was all on the right, I could make the blue drop capital fill the full section of text which, according to more feedback, looks more professional and fits in with the general style of my magazine nicely.

I then spaced out the quote in my text and added lines above and below, which my feedback advised, to make it really stand out successfully. Finally I added a small banner to the top of the right page which acted as an ‘advertisement’ for my artist’s album and twitter page.

Sunday 29 April 2012

Diary Entry #8


Diary Entry #8

Following this, I proceeded to alter my magazine more, using my audience feedback as a guide as to what I needed to improve. Once I had completed all the alterations and formed my final cut, I could definitely determine what a great impact a few small adjustments can have on making my magazine look more realistic.

Photoshoot #2

Photoshoot #2

After reading through my audience feedback, I knew taking new photos was something I had to do in order to imrpove my magazine and add diversity to it. So these are the photos I took to do so:

Diary Entry #7


Diary Entry #7

From reading through my audience feedback, it was evident that having the same model on the cover, contents page and double page spread proved a bit repetitive for readers, due to this I set out to get new photos of a different model. This time I had my model stand leaning against a wall outside; I thought this would be effective as it portrays what many people find stereotypical about youth, yet by them being in a magazine showing their success establishes that these stereotypes and assumptions are false. I edited this picture so that the background was light and that the colours of the clothes corresponded with my magazines colour scheme. I used this picture for my contents page, and moved the existing image to the double page spread.

Rough Cuts and Analysis


Rough Cut Analysis

After I had completed my first drafts for my magazine, I set out to retrieve some audience feedback in order to get different opinions from various people. This was a benefit to me because I could get they were able to immediately notice areas for improvement that I hadn’t noticed which I could change to do develop my magazine. 

Front Cover
In the early stages of creating my magazine, I decided on the name 716. I found this would be an effective name as it isn’t immediately obvious what that number means; it fits to the hip hop genre I decided to form my magazine around as it is the area code for West New York, which happens to be one of the places where hip hop was ‘born.’ After looking at my style model Q, I decided to use a coloured box to place my magazine name into in a similar way that they had; because I think it is gives the magazine an overall professional appearance.

Above this name, at the top of the page I created a black banner which I used as an area to inform readers about freebies included in the magazine. I feel banners on magazines are one of the areas that draw reader’s attention, and if it includes a freebie that appeals to them, it may influence them to purchase the magazine. I received positive feedback for this element, so will be keeping it in when developing to create my final cut.

After taking my photos and editing a few, I placed one onto my front cover. I decided my model would wear a blue hoodie as I felt it corresponded to the style and personality of my artist. I used the same blue as one of the colours in my colour scheme, which I used as the box containing 716. I think the colour develops the conventions of hip hop magazines, which you may usually see using colours, related to violence like reds, by using a more feminine pastel colour. Much like my magazine researches involving Nicki Minaj, where pinks are used to show her individual style and personality.

I had my model on my front cover stand with her chin slightly raised with a serious expression looking down toward the camera. After researching covers I found the ones where the artist looked toward the camera the most effective as they make a connection with the reader drawing them in to pick up the magazine. The picture I had chosen will be kept for my final cut as my feedback stated that it was a good quality and fits in with the hip hop genre; although it would look more professional if it filled the page more and slightly covered the title.

I had decided to include a quote from my double page spread as a ‘Taster’ of the story that was on it. But after receiving feedback I realised that the quote was far too long and had to be shortened for my final cut so that it didn’t take up as much room on the cover. After placing my stories on top of my picture I found it hard to place the text where it could be read easily, so I will have to enlarge my image for my final cut I will have to rearrange the text, shorten some sections of text and even alter the sizes of some pieces making sure they still stand out.

Another piece of text I added was ‘Voted No.1 music magazine of 2011’, as I’d seen similar things in my magazine research and though it would attract the eye of potential readers. But my feedback didn’t think it was necessary to include therefore it won’t be a feature included in my final cut.

After looking at Wonderland magazines, I noticed a common feature of theirs was having the barcode fit in with the black and white colour scheme of the magazine. I utilized this in my magazine and received positive feedback on it, although the barcode needed to be smaller in order to be more realistic.



Contents Page
After putting together my contents page I received feedback about the photo I had used suggesting that because it is a good photo, it should maybe be placed on a different page and that I should have a photo of a different person on the contents to add variation to my magazine.

I had included a quote from my main artist on the side of the page, which would remind the reader who the main attribute was in the magazine. This is a feature which I plan to keep for my final cut as it was approved of by my audience feedback. I was told the rest of the text on this page should be squashed a little more to the right and that I should add other additional contents so that the magazine would contain more. I included the magazine name in the corner of the page and the website, just like in my researched magazines which I will keep for my final cut; I plan to remove the page number of the contents page itself to eliminate the possible confusion readers may have with the already existing numbers on the page.




Double Page Spread
After setting out the boxes for my contents page I began by placing in the 3 images I wanted to include, and then followed by placing the text. Due to the way the page folded in the centre I ended up having 3 columns which weren’t of equal size, this was something that I was advised to change by my audience feedback. Although the use of the drop capital and the enlarged quote was approved of as it breaks up the text to make it look more interesting as I intended, I plan to set lines above and below the quote to make it stand out even more.

I wrote a brief introduction to the article and made it bold and italic to add diversity to the large amount of text on the page. This is a common feature that I found in my magazine research; it makes the text look a lot more professional and lets the reader find out what the story is about.

I added credits to the photos I included in my magazines to make the audience aware of whom my model was and who took the photos. This is a convention within magazines which was approved of by my audience feedback.


Rough Cut Feedback


Rough Cut Feedback

What do you like about my project at this stage?

Front cover
Contents page
Double page spread
- Photo good for genre
- Layout
- Colours
- Fonts
- Banner at the top


- Good photo
- Layout
- Colours
- Fonts
- Fade effect on image
- Quote at the side

- Good photos
- Colour scheme for genre
- Credits on the photo


What could be improved?

Front cover
Contents page
Double page spread
- Too much text squashed together
- Add more to just ‘Issue 9’
- Make the image fill the page more
- Quote is too long
- Don’t understand why the ‘No.1..’ is there
- Barcode is too big
- Add more pages
- Photo of a different artist, use existing photo on double page spread
- Move the contents more to the right
- Remove the page number (confuses readers)

- Smaller column width
- Move the text so it doesn’t cover the middle of the page
- Photos are all the same poses
- Make the quote stand out more


Saturday 28 April 2012

Diary Entry #6


Diary Entry #6

After I’d placed and arranged all the elements of my magazine, I started typing up the story which was featured on my double page spread. I knew from analysing other double page spreads included stories about artists subsequent to a release of a new album/single or finishing a tour; I decided to write mine about my artist’s release of her new album and her emerging success. I also included some plans for the future which I found was something common in magazines, that I’m sure readers would be interested in reading. After I’d had my article checked, I placed it into my double page spread, exported my magazine and collected audience feedback so I could be aware of any improvements I could make to allow it to be more effective.