Rough Cut Feedback
What do
you like about my project at this stage?
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Front cover
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Contents page
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Double page spread
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- Photo good for genre
- Layout
- Colours
- Fonts
- Banner at the top
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- Good photo
- Layout
- Colours
- Fonts
- Fade effect on image
- Quote at the side
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- Good photos
- Colour scheme for genre
- Credits on the photo
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What could
be improved?
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Front cover
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Contents page
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Double page spread
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- Too much text squashed
together
- Add more to just ‘Issue 9’
- Make the image fill the page more
- Quote is too long
- Don’t understand why the ‘No.1..’ is
there
- Barcode is too big
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- Add more pages
- Photo of a different artist, use existing photo on
double page spread
- Move the contents more to the right
- Remove the page number (confuses readers)
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- Smaller column width
- Move the text so it doesn’t cover the
middle of the page
- Photos are all the same poses
- Make the quote stand out more
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